From 6383c71a7da19153e3df8fc9789431864bdf1844 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Committer Date: Wed, 22 Jun 2022 08:06:47 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] proof read - input from corbett fan and friend --- md/about/about_1stPerson.md | 12 ++++++------ md/about/about_3rdPerson.md | 12 ++++++------ 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/md/about/about_1stPerson.md b/md/about/about_1stPerson.md index 791755b..055aa67 100644 --- a/md/about/about_1stPerson.md +++ b/md/about/about_1stPerson.md @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ -I've got a Masters of Computer Science and Engineering from the [e:University of New South Wales](https://www.unsw.edu.au/), Sydney, Australia. A Graduate Diploma in Visual Effects from the [e:Victorian College of the Arts](https://finearts-music.unimelb.edu.au/about-us/vca), Melbourne, Australia and a Bachelor of Computer Science from the [e:University of Oslo](https://www.uio.no/), Norway. +I've got a Masters of Computer Science and Engineering from the [e:University of New South Wales](https://www.unsw.edu.au/), Sydney, Australia, a Graduate Diploma in Visual Effects from the [e:Victorian College of the Arts](https://finearts-music.unimelb.edu.au/about-us/vca), Melbourne, Australia, and a Bachelor of Computer Science from the [e:University of Oslo](https://www.uio.no/), Norway. -I'm an author of the books [e:The Soul Sailor](https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/34940798-the-soul-sailor) (2014) and [e:Bill Goats and the Forest](https://billgoats.com) (2022). +I'm an author. I have written two books: [e:The Soul Sailor](https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/34940798-the-soul-sailor) (2014) and [e:Bill Goats and the Forest](https://billgoats.com) (2022). -I'm an artist, and I have held some smaller exhibitions and illustrated two books. A selection of my artwork is located at [e:mpath.ink](https://mpath.ink). +I'm an artist, and I have held some small art exhibitions and illustrated two books. A selection of my artwork is located at [e:mpath.ink](https://mpath.ink). -I'm a filmmaker, and have made [e:several short films](https://odysee.com/@frode:6). In 2005, an award winning film of mine was selected to open North America's biggest short film festival, [e:The Palm Springs International ShortFest](https://www.psfilmfest.org/). My films have been screened in Australia, France, Greece, Japan, Ireland, Italy, Nigeria, Portugal, Russia, Spain and the USA. +I'm a filmmaker, and have made [e:several short films](https://odysee.com/@frode:6). In 2005, an award-winning film of mine was selected to open North America's biggest short film festival, [e:The Palm Springs International ShortFest](https://www.psfilmfest.org/). My films have been screened in Australia, France, Greece, Japan, Ireland, Italy, Nigeria, Portugal, Russia, Spain and the USA. -I'm a podcaster, and together with Miriam Ekelund, I'm is making the podcast [e:Antijantepodden](https://antijantepodden.no). +I'm a podcaster, and together with Miriam Ekelund, I'm producing the podcast [e:Antijantepodden](https://antijantepodden.no). -And last but not least, I'm is a programmer. I've has worked as a system developer, project manager, CTO and CEO for different tech companies. For example, I've created the publishing solution, [e:Jongleur](https://gitlab.com/pqq/jongleur/), which was used for building this website. +Last but not least, I'm is a programmer. I've has worked as a system developer, project manager, CTO and CEO for different tech companies. For example, I've created the publishing solution [e:Jongleur](https://gitlab.com/pqq/jongleur/), which was used for building this website. diff --git a/md/about/about_3rdPerson.md b/md/about/about_3rdPerson.md index 679c536..aee0f31 100644 --- a/md/about/about_3rdPerson.md +++ b/md/about/about_3rdPerson.md @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ -Frode has a Masters of Computer Science and Engineering from the [e:University of New South Wales](https://www.unsw.edu.au/), Sydney, Australia. A Graduate Diploma in Visual Effects from the [e:Victorian College of the Arts](https://finearts-music.unimelb.edu.au/about-us/vca), Melbourne, Australia and a Bachelor of Computer Science from the [e:University of Oslo](https://www.uio.no/), Norway. +Frode has a Masters of Computer Science and Engineering from the [e:University of New South Wales](https://www.unsw.edu.au/), Sydney, Australia, a Graduate Diploma in Visual Effects from the [e:Victorian College of the Arts](https://finearts-music.unimelb.edu.au/about-us/vca), Melbourne, Australia, and a Bachelor of Computer Science from the [e:University of Oslo](https://www.uio.no/), Norway. -Frode is an author of the books [e:The Soul Sailor](https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/34940798-the-soul-sailor) (2014) and [e:Bill Goats and the Forest](https://billgoats.com) (2022). +Frode is an author. He has written two books: [e:The Soul Sailor](https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/34940798-the-soul-sailor) (2014) and [e:Bill Goats and the Forest](https://billgoats.com) (2022). -Frode is an artist. He has held some smaller exhibitions and illustrated two books. You will find his artwork at [e:mpath.ink](https://mpath.ink). +Frode is an artist. He has held some small art exhibitions and has illustrated two books. You will find his artwork at [e:mpath.ink](https://mpath.ink). -Frode is filmmaker and has made [e:several short films](https://odysee.com/@frode:6). In 2005, an award winning film of his, was selected to open North America's biggest short film festival, [e:The Palm Springs International ShortFest](https://www.psfilmfest.org/). He has had his films screened in Australia, France, Greece, Japan, Ireland, Italy, Nigeria, Portugal, Russia, Spain and the USA. +Frode is a filmmaker and has made [e:several short films](https://odysee.com/@frode:6). In 2005, an award-winning film of his was selected to open North America's biggest short film festival, [e:The Palm Springs International ShortFest](https://www.psfilmfest.org/). He has had his films screened in Australia, France, Greece, Japan, Ireland, Italy, Nigeria, Portugal, Russia, Spain and the USA. -Frode is a podcaster, and together with Miriam Ekelund, he is making the podcast [e:Antijantepodden](https://antijantepodden.no). +Frode is a podcaster, and together with Miriam Ekelund, he is produces the podcast [e:Antijantepodden](https://antijantepodden.no). -And last but not least, Frode is a programmer. He has worked as a system developer, project manager, CTO and CEO for different tech companies. Frode has for example created the publishing solution, [e:Jongleur](https://gitlab.com/pqq/jongleur/), which was used for building this website. +Last but not least, Frode is a programmer. He has worked as a system developer, project manager, CTO and CEO for different tech companies. For example, he created the publishing solution [e:Jongleur](https://gitlab.com/pqq/jongleur/), which was used for building this website.