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-i have done a lot of things over the years. like taking a master’s degree in computer science and engineering and a graduate diploma in visual effects. i have written a couple of books, where one sold to almost 40 different countries. i have held some exhibitions of my drawings and traveled the world with my short films. i have also produced a pretty popular podcast. i have lived in europe, oceania and central america. and, last and possibly least, i have built “bookrack”, the system that powers this little site.
+hi, all! i am fro, the the creator of this little home on the internet.
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+to try to summarise a lot in a few lines of text i am a guy with a master’s degree in computer science and engineering, and a graduate diploma in visual effects. i have written a couple of books, where one sold to almost 40 different countries. i have held some exhibitions with my drawings and traveled the world with my short films. i also produced a pretty popular podcast a few years back. i have moved quite a lot, and i have lived in europe, oceania and central america. and, last and possibly least, i have built “bookrack”, the system that powers this little website.